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Author: mcmorisi

source/data-formats/bson.txt

@@ -124,23 +124,34 @@ Work with Raw BSON Data
 some situations that might require using raw BSON documents:
 
 - Moving a document between databases or collections
-- Writing binary blobs to a disk
+- Writing binary data to a disk
 - Bypassing the performance overhead of converting to and from {+language+} dictionaries
 
-You can use the ``RawBSONDocument`` class to represent raw BSON documents. To use
-``RawBSONDocument`` objects to represent documents in your collection, set the
-``document_class`` parameter of the ``MongoClient`` constructor to ``RawBSONDocument``.
+The ``RawBSONDocument`` class is a representation of a BSON document that provides
+access to the underlying raw BSON bytes. To use ``RawBSONDocument`` objects to represent
+documents in your collection, set the ``document_class`` parameter of the ``MongoClient``
+constructor to ``RawBSONDocument``.
 
-The following example configures a ``MongoClient`` object to use ``RawBSONDocument``,
-then retrieves the sample document:
+The following example configures a ``MongoClient`` object to use ``RawBSONDocument`` objects
+to model the collection, then retrieves the sample document from the preceding examples:
 
-.. code-block:: python
+.. io-code-block::
+   :copyable: true
+
+   .. input::
+      :language: python
 
       from bson.raw_bson import RawBSONDocument
 
       client = pymongo.MongoClient("<connection URI>", document_class=RawBSONDocument)
-      collection = client["<database name>"]["<collection name>"]
+      collection = client.sample_restaurants.restaurants
       raw_doc = collection.find_one({"name": "Mongo's Pizza"})
+      print(type(raw_doc))
+
+   .. output::
+      :visible: false
+
+      <class 'bson.raw_bson.RawBSONDocument'>
 
 .. note::